Allow me to announce it here
So that all that passby can hear
Then they will know, love does exist
So, their hopes to find love must persist
Our days turned into months into years, now ten
Each passing day, has me a lesson to enlighten
More of me, you, and of the world around
No longer can I talk of love that is blind
Once, I saw only your goodness
And refused to see any of your mess
With time, my vision has sharpened
I see more clearly all that has happened
The good and the not-so-good.
Still, my love for you remains.
I can tell your emotions from a distance
Bored, irritated, happy, whatever, in any instance
I can tell when the angel of goodness has smiled at you,
As I know when demons have fought with you
Transparent, is what you now are to me.
Lately, I have seen how you look at me,
Which means that you too, see through me,
It means I can never quite hide,
But that’s ok, coz the world is eerily wide
I just want to be where you are.
A pleasant journey, it has been.
How else did time fly like so?
In between, we have much to say and show.
Look at those little three?
Who would have thought?
Pleasant journey yes, but…
In between we flexed our muscle
And caused ourselves pain
But we still smiled at the rain
God has been good.
Allow me to mention
That new little red dress,
You won’t believe what Lau said,
“Mum you’re so lucky”
And that you have fine taste
I want to ask a favour,
can I wear it daily?
The other day,
I saw the lone white strand on your head,
But you said I don’t pluck it dead,
That made me love you so much more,
For when I see my first wrinkle,
I should not fret,
we are in it together,
Aren’t we?
February 14, 2008 at 4:45 pm
Beautiful!
February 14, 2008 at 8:32 pm
awwwww happy valentines day mwari
February 14, 2008 at 9:09 pm
What can i say ………… speechless. Maybe there’s still hope for me. Happy valentine’s.
February 15, 2008 at 9:51 am
Great prose. I wish I felt that. I have posted on Valentine and my experience
February 15, 2008 at 12:27 pm
Thanks all!
Much as I find the Valentine’s day distasteful due to all the hype, I am always torn between celebrating the day or giving it a blackout. I would never, for instance show up dressed in red. That is just so…i don’t know. But it is good when you have something to celebrate, even in small ways, such as ‘attempted poetry’
February 18, 2008 at 12:31 pm
lovely!
aegeus.